WALT use precise nouns to add detail for our reader

This Week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader

We took a paragraphs and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns

Here is an example

In the weekend I had lot of shopping to do with my mother.We went to the KFC to get some lunch  box  .We also went to look for some Phone for my  Ally birthday.I had to choose between a doll and a soft toy. After  that we went to the farmers  to buy some  I got two new dress and  a pair of Nike.Because I had been so good,mum took me the dairy to buy an lollies .Lucky me

Ka Kite

From:OSANA