WALT use precise nouns to add detail for our reader

This Week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader

We took a paragraphs and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns

Here is an example

In the weekend I had lot of shopping to do with my mother.We went to the KFC to get some lunch  box  .We also went to look for some Phone for my  Ally birthday.I had to choose between a doll and a soft toy. After  that we went to the farmers  to buy some  I got two new dress and  a pair of Nike.Because I had been so good,mum took me the dairy to buy an lollies .Lucky me

Ka Kite

From:OSANA

Consequences Map

In Flox class we have been doing a Consequences map with 3 or 2 buddies.We have a Scenario ,Positive choice,Neutral choice (Not to bad and not to good) Negative choice . We work on this yesterday with Mr Hopkins. 

Ka Kite From Osana

Toolkit Day

November the 10th was when O'neil class and Flox class also McMahon class had a toolkit.We had visit from new winder school come and see our toolkit. We also want to do it one last time.

A trip to the moon

November the 12th was when flox class had the google expedition. Flox class was excited to use the deceive we like to use them again. Best time ever at Hay Park School.

Explain everything by use time table

This week Flox class as been using explain everything on the iPad.We use our 5 time tables to work out our maths problem.

Rugby World cup four sentence recount

WALT:Recount an event 4 sentence

Yesterday we wrote about the rugby world cup because the all black have won in a roll two times.