DLO About Earth

Shhh it's a secret!!

Hi my name is Osana, we did a farewell for our  teacher Miss Hopcroft

Farewell for Miss Hopcroft" 

Poem

I have been doing a poem about where i am from Poem

The phase of the Moon

Explanation writing

WALT: I am learning to write an explanation.

Success criteria	Me	LB	T
I have used an interesting title that tells the reader what my writing is about			Y
I have used a general statement to introduce the topic			Y
My writing explains how one thing leads to another
I have used time connectives to show the order of the process (first...next…)
I have organised my text using paragraphs
I have linked together 2 or 3 sentences to show cause and effect (so…if…this causes...this makes...because)
I have used technical vocabulary
I have used capital letters, full stops and commas

Use this chart to help you to write an explanation on the 8 phases of the Moon.

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The phases of the Moon

Have you ever wondered why the Moon can look different every night? There are eight key phases that the Moon goes through every 29.5 days, which is the same as one month.

Although we always see the same side of the moon no  matter where ever

we are in earth and at night the moon changes.The moon spins on it axis and it take 29  days for the Moon to orbit the Earth.New Zealand when it is day time half of the Earth goes black and half of the earth is bright.

The phase of the moon is new moon is when it goes black as full moon is when it so white and it comes up with the hole moon half moon is when it so half of the moon waxing Gibbous waning crescent first quarter waxing crescent last moon.

Saturn information report

We have been learning about space 

Take a photo of your plan using an ipad and insert it here.

Success Criteria

Clear categories with subtitles	Self	LB
Use questions to hook the reader in the introduction	✔
Use sentences and paragraphs	✔
Use facts to inform the reader	✔
Use different sentence starters	✔
Use VCOP	✔

Start writing here…

• Introduction

Saturn is the second largest planet on the solar system why does earth the only planets that has gravity.

• Paragraph 1-Appearance

It  has beautiful rings and Saturn is light brown and it even saturn rings aren't very thick saturn's rings are made out of dust,ice and rocks. It has no water on saturn ,saturn has 62 moon titan is the largest and is the only moon in the solar system with an atmosphere .Saturn is a gas giant just like jupiter and it is a very cold place.

• Paragraph 2-Size

Saturn size is 20,000 KM and it is the second smallest planet on the solar system saturn is far from Earth.Saturn is approximately 1,427 million km from the sun and saturn is very heavy at all.

• paragraph 3-time on saturn

Every 14 years the ring look like they’ve disappear when viewed through as small  or medium sized telescope .A planet day is the time it take the planet to rotate or spin once on it axis Saturn rotate faster than Earth. Also Saturn is the second smallest planet in our solar System.The ring around saturn are thick and they are about 20 meters deep.That’s about two school bus lengths   

My name in New zaeland sign language

This week we have been learning some sign language in Flox class This is link to my name in NZSL.


Can you sign your name?

Interesting Facts

Hi i'm Osana and this is an audio recording
 https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B7FcmX8cD-3hdjh4bUZTcHVHdXM&authuser=0 

 I really like recording my voice to give someone in my class feedback and it faster than typing